The following is an excerpt from one of my manuscripts called Mountainside, which is the writings and thoughts on life that I penned while out exploring the wilds of nature with a friend. I was rereading it this weekend and wanted to share an excerpt. This excerpt is from the middle of our trip, right after we had spent an hour on top of a boulder cliff looking out over a broad valley:
“We passed by something which we had not noticed before, a recessed room within the very boulder we still walked upon. It was a cutout of sorts within the top of the rock itself, quite large and spacious. The cutout was a rectangular shape and recessed down into the boulder about four feet. Gazing at it further, we surmised that some ancient powerful tremor had cut the stone in two and slid the top third of the boulder a few feet to the right, forming a stone walkway which led to the ledge of the cliff we had just been on, and also the same force which had made this out-of-place recess in the stone we now peered at. Examining it in this new light, it looked as if the boulder was really two boulders, one sitting slightly out of alignment and on top of the other.
As we entered the stone room, the toe of my boot made contact with an object I had not seen; it let out a complaint of high pitched sounds as it flew haphazardly across the stone floor. I could not discern what it was I had unintentionally kicked. I waited for the sound to stop and then searched the floor earnestly, sliding my hands across the smooth cold stone. After a few moments, I managed to come upon its location.
There it sat, a tiny piece of glass, hiding in the corner, still wounded from my careless boot. I picked it up and eyed it carefully. Perfectly disguised it was, with its murky brown complexion. It would have fit expertly into the natural world, if not for the sound it made which testified that it didn’t belong. It was a stranger in this rectangular world of stone, a wayfarer that had ended its journey to rest within a comfortable home. And though its color aptly camouflaged it in the pebbled ground, something in this place wouldn’t let the poor glass get away with its disguise.
I laid it down on the ground and struck it again, this time intentionally with the toe of my boot. I watched it dance across the floor of stone. Its weak and high pitched call announced that it was not native to this world of stone. Material of human construction has not yet withstood the test of time as these ancient boulders have. The stones in this place are not yet willing to let those of a weaker nature acquire a place within their private home. I felt pity for the tiny piece of glass and its lack of confidence, surrounded by such mighty stone.
I looked down for one of the small rocks scattered sparsely about the stone floor. I found one and struck it with my boot to compare its nature with that of the glass. Instantly the little rock resonated a strong, deep tone, not afraid to show what it was made of, already having been tried and tested in the ancient world from whence it came. It had no doubts about its character. After a moment, it came to rest in the northeast corner next to the glass. I looked at them lying side by side in the corner. And I thought of the nature of man. How many still lack confidence, having never been tested or tried in the world around them? “Rejoice in trials and give thanks,” the Bible says, for that will show us what we are made of. To know the limits of our character and resolve, that is what takes us from being glass to rock.”




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nice one…are you made of glass, squealing and easy shattered or…love the description here. loving the mountains myself, i could see exactly where we were. 2009 in many ways tested my faith…
Thanks Brian
Mountains are the best. There’s nothing like a good view…but often they’re difficult to arrive at. It’s a very cool metaphor for life in general I think.
That is astonishingly beautiful, Ben. I was totally taken up into the scene and I enjoyed my break from the rest of the day immensely. You are a fine writer.
Benji, I agree with you that mountains are difficult to arrive at but once we are on top, the view is spectacular.
Thank you Lydia, that’s very kind! Your compliments made my day
And thanks BK for stopping by. I’m glad you also like the symbolism of what mountains represent. There’s nothing like a good mountain view.
Haha, you’re now offering discounts huh? Interesting.
Now I’m sitting here pondering whether I’m the glass or the rock…
Nicely done.
this is great! makes one think…
I sure miss the mountains! there aren’t any in Indiana but there are BEAUTIFUL ones in New Mexico where I’m from. Sure miss them!
Definitely! New Mexico has the best mountains. The ones near the border of New Mexico and Colorado that are covered with Aspen groves are breathtaking. Thanks very much for stopping by!
I won’t disagree with you on that! I used to live by the Organ Mountains which you can see in Las Cruces. gorgeous!
Very descriptive, I couldn’t help feeling sorry for the glass being weak and sounding scared in the company of the elders. But remember, glass is made from sand which has underwent an amazing transformation.
By the way, I am going to be in New Mexico in May!
May is the best month for traveling I think. There’s still a remnant of spring, but the weather is nice and warm. You’ll have a great time. When are you going to make your way out to San Diego though? It’s a great place to visit
I must make the commitment to do it. Perhaps I’ll fly over from NM and celebrate Cinco de Mayo with you!
Sounds good to me! But be prepared to visit a few beaches
May is the first good beach month.
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